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Joining:

Within your request, please tell me why you want to join this group and send me your favorite piece by you. The piece is so I can know more about you, your admittance to the group is based off of your reason for joining.

Submitting:

-- 2 deviations per week
-- please submit to the correct folder
-- each piece needs two votes of approval
-- if your piece is declined you are welcome to ask why
-- pieces submitted to over 25 groups will automatically be declined

here is more info on submission rules: [link]

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I would like to start off by stating that this was so hard to judge, as I simply fell in love with every piece that was submitted. I know that is something often said about judging contests, but I really mean it when I say how amazed I was with the beautiful letters everyone was able to write. If you haven’t yet had a chance to look at the entries, they can all be located in this folder: [link]

To everyone who won, please feel free to contact the people offering critiques with which piece you’d like them to do; and wait for the features and other prizes, as they will come shortly. Now, without further ado, the winners for #IntrinsicallyInked’s first contest:

1st Place:
A(nother) letter to myself.You have grown.

You are not ten years
old and silent.

You've found the words
and you have made them
your sword and your shield,

your battering ram against
the walls you built when you
were too afraid to live.

And I know that some days
you feel like letting go,
like falling.

That you wonder if it might
feel like flying if you spread your arms
and close your eyes and pretend you
aren't doing this to die.

You have stood on the edges
of rooftops and bridges
    (To follow her, I know,
          but you were not born to go this way.)
and you have climbed back down.

You will make it, my girl,
by the skin of your teet

by ~trembling-knees


2nd Place:
LettersDear girl - Dear precious, lovely girl,

You have fallen,
and I have watched as you pressed your knees and palms into the dirt,
defeated.
But you did not forget your strength.
I watched you raise your salt-water eyes to the horizon,
and push upwards, determined for a new dawn.

Child,
Why do you worry so?
These days are not endless and these nights,
they are no darker than when you lit them up with fireflies or
sirens.
I know sleep finds you troubled,
but tomorrow is sure to change again,
and there is still so much life in your bones.

Love,
do you remember what the bottom felt like?
Have you forgotten what it is to be alone?

by *RiseandBe

3rd Place:
Remembering Who You Once Were Little Eve,

Life can be told through numbers- did you know that, dear child? That by saying a few simple syllables, by writing a stream of organized marks, you can communicate so much. Everyone knows you can pack a world, a story, a person into just a few words- but none consider numbers. Then again, I know you’re not one for numbers- even now (if this letter arrives on time, of course) you’re beginning to favor the weaving of words instead of the futile calculation of numbers…

Enough of all that rambling, I have a feeling that you’re wondering why this is here. Well, I’m here to tell the story of us- of every

by =EvelynTaliette


Honorable Mentions:
SummerEllie,

Summer is coming, you feel it in six year old bones sheltered beneath skin paled by flourescent lights and dusty shelves. She will call to you and attempt to lure you in with the promise of dry, dusty heat cooled by southern breezes; but you, so unlike your boisterous siblings, will dig in your heels and bury yourself deeper within tales with boundaries set in ink.

You will watch the seasons play out on your mothers face, placed there by the iron fists of your step father. Pink will turn to red, red to purple, purple to black, black to yellow and blue will hide beneath the surface; a kaleidoscope of colour that will turn your stomach
The Things I Want to Say to YouThe things I want to say to you
would take me apart
and take me years
to phrase just right.

The things I want to say to you,
younger self,
are overrated and probably only matter to me;
though I think you'd like me
if you met me now.

I am taller than you and thicker, but more beautiful.
The smile on my face is one I've earned,
unlike yours.
I am weak for stick figures with deep voices
and just as prone to drinking poison
as you are.

The poems you are writing rhyme perfectly
and linger in my head
till now.
Even your darkest thought and dirtiest daydream
seems like the cover of a children's storybook and the longing I feel for
From a Once-Ghost to a Now-GhostYou are twelve years old, a ghost and a memory, but that doesn't stop you being here with me. You view me as a wisp, an ethereal image hazy with what might be but I can see that you are a stamp of yesterday as indelible as octopus ink. You are in my eyes, and under them, in the depths of who I am. You will be changed, soon, by a moment that falls heavy around your shoulders even as it darts away.

When it happens, you will know that nothing will ever be the same, but you won't know how much this moment will become part of you. You won't know that for another 15 years, when you will revisit this moment in the hospital, undressing yourself and

by *Lacewinged-Beauty,             by ~TheAntiAnti-Drug,              and by *bloodawni


*Lacewinged-Beauty, *bloodawni and ~TheAntiAnti-Drug will each be receiving 50 points and a one piece feature from my personal journal.

=EvelynTaliette  will be receiving 150 points, a 2-piece feature with other winners from my personal journal, a 3-piece feature from *RiseandBe, a custom box shared with the other winners on #IntrinsicallyInked  for two weeks, 1 critique from me and a critique *0hgravity.

*RiseandBe  will be receiving 300 points, a 4-piece feature with other winners from my personal journal, a 3-piece feature from herself (hehehe), a custom box shared with the other winners on #IntrinsicallyInked  for two weeks, 2 critiques from me, a critique from *glossolalias, and a critique *0hgravity.

~trembling-knees will be receiving a one month subscription, 100 points, a 6-piece feature with other winners from my personal journal, a 3-piece feature from *RiseandBe, a custom box shared with the other winners on #IntrinsicallyInked  for one month, 3 critiques from me, a critique from *glossolalias, and a critique *0hgravity.



To everyone who entered , thank you so much for your lovely pieces!


And with that, I hope you all have a lovely week! :heart:
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:iconlostmymind193:
Thank you for the acceptance! I'm very excited to be a part of this group. ^.^
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*0hgravity Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ happy to have you.
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=HillsOfMyst Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the invite! This looks like a great group, I can't wait to contribute something! :la: (If I ever write something again :fear: )
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~intricately-ordinary Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely! We are eager to read your lovely work! :heart:
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~NotenSMSK Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah a group from your side :) that is a good act! I do hope that it works well! I wanted to open a group as well but ah well... just too busy. Keep up the good work :) if you ever need idea's, I will be glad to help!
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~trembling-knees Dec 28, 2012   General Artist
Thank you for the invitation! I look forward to seeing this group become something wonderful :heart:
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~intricately-ordinary Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for joining, we're eager to have you!
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=Sammur-amat Dec 28, 2012   General Artist
Thank you so very kindly for the invite, sweetheart! :love:
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~intricately-ordinary Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for being a part of our group! :heart:
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=Sammur-amat Dec 28, 2012   General Artist
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